Monday, 10 August 2015

Week 5 session 1 interim


Unfortunately I missed out on the interim critique as we ran out of time! However, Caroline gave me some quick feedback on my posters so I could tweak a bit before tomorrow.
Poster 1: 
> Illustration a bit unclear in terms of emphasising the money symbols. Make these more prominent.
> The child should be sitting in the broken glass
> The tagline needs to be larger

Poster 2:
> Doesn't need background
> Portrait instead of landscape
> tagline larger 
> composition (centred in a circle with public plates going through the middle, tagline centred below)

I will start tweaking these before my presentation/ interim critique tomorrow.

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