Printing out ones posters is the true critiquing test, being able to step back and reflect. This is a self-critique to improve and make minor changes to my work.
What are you feeding me?
- Bigger headline
- make headline greyer
- refill more saturated
- more condensed strapline
- use personal pronouns in strapline
- play on wehi of plea from the child
- title = shouting/ anger?
- use 'please' in strapline
- more detail around seed?
What are you feeding your child?
- make logo white
- diff font sizes in headline needed?
- font = squarer?
- font = match pasta?
- not as florescent

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