Mini presentation

I presented my "Public, the real NZ" concept to the class and discovered I wasn't as far along as everyone else, however wanted some feedback so thought it would be worth it. Although I didn't receive a large range of feedback, I got some great suggestions to try make up the letters with the plates like pixels, or show more contrast through stacking the plates up o top of each other. Both of these I will attempt when developing my idea.

Even though I would like to attempt to paint/ draw this, I think it may be more efficient use the computer to try new compositions, and then try by hand at the end.