Monday, 17 August 2015

Last day critique and final printing

These are the two posters I brought to class today for a final critique. Having had them professionally printed yesterday I decided that there were still a few minor things I wanted to change, primarily type.

Critique (tutor and self):
What are you feeding me:
- right-align text (headline and strap)
- move strap further up, didn't end up changing due to being on the line of the refill
- take away bluey tinge
- grey the headline a bit more

What are you feeding your child:
- florescent down even more, was adjusting to massey printers not professional
- grey (not white) for the logo
- play with fonts more

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